范文：

Dear Li hua,

    Of all my classmates, you ,the most considerate and warmhearted girl, are always ready to give your hand to everyone who needs to help.

    文章第一段写第一个要点。即文章中心

    I clearly remember that last year our classmates Xiaomei suffered from acute appendix at night. It is you who took her to the hospital in midnight as quickly as possible. In order not to disturb others you even didn’t call up other classmates to accompany you. Until the next morning other classmates in our dormitory got to know the fact. And we knew that you didn’t sleep all the night to attend to Xiaomei. Moreover in our daily life, you always comfort the one who are in depression because of bad score or classmates relationship. So we would like to call you the sweet sister.

    第二段举出你能够想的出来的，最简单的事例，作文的关键不是你的事例有多么新颖，而是你写的句子是否能够显示出你的水平，比如说难词，比如说难句。比如说你是否用了联接词，如in order to, until, moreover, so 等。

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